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The Kitsune

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"Frozen to a standstill by those bright eyes and that bushy tail..."
I was standing on all fours, ready to be chased away or shouted at... Her smell was tantilizing, like nothing I've ever ever even come across and she was pretty too, even when she stood frozen in front of me, bin bags in her hands...

I'll explain some issues you may have before I really begin my story. My name is Hitomi, which means the human body, it's kind of ironic because I'm a kitsune and I can switch from human to fox. I'm eighteen years old. A kitsune is the japanese form of a werewolf, but we turn into slightly larger than common foxes, and well you all know the deal on werewolves. I have to change once a month, but I tend to change more than that, I prefer four legs to two.

I was wandering around a human park after shifting into my fox form, like I said, when I'ma fox I look a bit bigger than the average common fox, most people pay no attention to me, but there are some who shout at me, try to scare me away, chase me or throw things at me, the chasing parts are fun because I get a good work out that way.

I was being chased around the park by some drunk teenagers, to be honest, I could have outrun them, but the night was getting on and I was bored. Everything was going fine until a bottle flew past my head, when I realised they were throwing bottles at me, I shot out of the park. Way to ruin MY fun.
When I was out of the park, that was when it all began. I was wondering the streets near the park, head down sniffing around, then suddenly there was the most amazing mouth watering arousing scent... I wanted it, my hormones told me it was a girl, I wanted her, so being as inquisitive and as dim as I am, I followed the scent.

I followed the scent onto a human property, near a large car I began to count smells, three humans, the girl and two cats. I walked down their front path, if they came out I was in trouble, I knew I shouldn't have come over here but that smell, it taunted me...
A door open and I froze. The beautiful smell washed over me, making me forget why I was actually here, oh the girl.
How badly I wanted her, hormones were already getting the better of me. She walked round the corner, I thought I was going to be able to run, she hadn't seen me yet. She looked up and froze, her breathing getting faster, crap she had seen me, I mentally prepared myself for a scream, the bin bags in her hands flying towards me, her parents coming out. None of that happened, she just watched me
"Frozen to a standstill by those bright eyes and that bushy tail..."
Her voice, oh how beautiful it was! She focused on my sillouette, watching me, suddenly she started to back away, had I scared her?
"There's a fox outside!" I heard her call, that was my queue to leave, but I didn't I ran to the nearest thicket to watch for her, to smell her.
I was in WAY over my head here...
She came back outside, placing each step quietly and slowly, clicking her tounge as she walked to the bin, she was trembiling slightly. I heard her but the rubbish in the bin and she began to walk back to where she saw me, sniffing,  was she going to follow my scent? Was she actually human?
"What are you doing?" a parent asked as they came out to light up their cigarettes.
"I'm looking for the fox" She admitted shyly, oh how cute she was!
She sat down sniffing the air, she looked directly at the thicket I was hiding in...
"Stay put Hitomi" I told myself and I slwoly crouched down, she slyly put her hand on my paw under the thicket and whispered
"I'll be back later..."
She went inside, I ran
Last night as I was taking the rubbish out I came across quite a large fox, he was beautiful, he inspired me lol I will probably carry this on :3

This is like intro/chapter 1 i think

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thats pretty good